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I like to have fun with my family.
Nowadays, I have huge interests in real estate investment, especially buying a real estate at auction.
Now is the right time to restart studying about real estate investment, since the housing prices have gone down these days, due to the rapidly rising interest rates that have started in the United States. For the last three and a half years, since the COVID 19 Pandemic, the housing prices surged. And now is the time when that surged prices go down. So, I've been keeping an eye on the market to catch the right moment to invest.

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