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Section 18
Next my role is support Korea Blog. I contact with Bloger and produce Bybit content and News.
And when bybit proceed campaign promotion or release new product posting on Blog

Section 19
And I create product guideline in Korean. Because Korea government regulate crypto market. So Bybit can not Korean language service now. that¡¯s why I make guideline and landing page. So we can bypass marketing. Through guideline induce bybit users and increase keyword search.

Section 20
Last, I follow up major crypto exchanges campaign. Through search and analysis other exchanges our team create good quality campaign and raise sign up number.

Section 21
I have explained my Role so far. My last step is what I will do.
So, First, I will search blog and website proceed viral marketing
Second, I will promotion and create Guideline when bybit launching new project and product.
Third, research crypto exchanges campaign and progress fresh campaign
Last, analysis data in depth help to our team.
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Hi, Seong Woo!
Good luck with your presentation tomorrow.
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Section 18
Next my role is support Korea Blog.
>>Next, my role is to support the Korean Blog.
 I contact with Bloger and produce Bybit content and News.
>>I made a deal with the blogger to content and promote Bybit.
And when bybit proceed campaign promotion or release new product posting on Blog
>>That's when the bybit will proceed to campaign promotion or release new products to be posted on the Blog.

Section 19
And I create product guideline in Korean.
>>I wrote the product guidelines in Korean.
 Because Korea government regulate crypto market. 
>>Because the Korean government regulates the crypto market.
So Bybit can not Korean language service now. 
>>So, Bybit cannot use the Korean language service now.
that¡¯s why I make guideline and landing page.
>>That's the reason why I make guidelines and a landing page.
 So we can bypass marketing.
>>CORRECT
 Through guideline induce bybit users and increase keyword search.
>>Through the guidelines, it induces the bybit users and increases the keyword search.

Section 20
Last, I follow up major crypto exchanges campaign.
>>Lastly, I follow up on the major crypto exchange campaign.
 Through search and analysis other exchanges our team create good quality campaign and raise sign up number.
>>Through search and analysis of other exchanges, our team created a good quality campaign and raised the sign-up number.

Section 21
I have explained my Role so far. 
>>CORRECT
My last step is what I will do.
>>This will be the last step I can do.
So, First, I will search blog and website proceed viral marketing
>>First, I will search blogs and websites and proceed with viral marketing.
Second, I will promotion and create Guideline when bybit launching new project and product.
>>Second, I will promote and create the guidelines when bybit is launching a new project and product.
Third, research crypto exchanges campaign and progress fresh campaign
>>Third, I will research some crypto exchange campaigns and progress with the fresh campaign.
Last, analysis data in depth help to our team.
>>Last, the analysis data in depth will help our team.
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