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Do you think it\'s easy for people to recognize real religion from a cult? Why do you say so?

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In my perspective, it would be challenging for people to distinguish between authentic religion and cult. According to the research, the cult refers to a new religious movement. However, it is not a foreign concept. Most of these cults mimic the originals, which is why cults are indistinguishable. First, cult adopts and sometimes develops the concept of originals. In the case of the unification church, most ideas are adopted from Christianity and Buddhism. Instead of Jesus, there is the Messiah. Also, there is a church-like chapel. However, there is a Buddhism prayer rather than a hymn. In some cases, cults differentiate themselves from originals by altering their interpretation of the Bible. Jehovah¡¯s Witnesses is one example. It strictly interprets secularism and forces followers to follow a rigid religious life. Since religion and heresy share similar concepts, many followers are deceived and contribute large wealth.

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In my perspective, it would be challenging for people to distinguish between authentic religion and cult. 
>>>  correct 
According to the research, the cult refers to a new religious movement. 
>>>  correct
>>> OR: According to a research, the cult refers to a new religious movement. 
However, it is not a foreign concept. 
>>>  correct
Most of these cults mimic the originals, which is why cults are indistinguishable.
>>> correct 
First, cult adopts and sometimes develops the concept of originals. 
>>> First, the cult group adopts and sometimes develops the concept of originals.  
In the case of the unification church, most ideas are adopted from Christianity and Buddhism. 
>>>  correct 
Instead of Jesus, there is the Messiah. 
>>>  correct 
Also, there is a church-like chapel. 
>>>  correct 
However, there is a Buddhism prayer rather than a hymn. 
>>>  correct 
In some cases, cults differentiate themselves from originals by altering their interpretation of the Bible. 
>>> correct 
Jehovah¡¯s Witnesses is one example. 
>>> correct 
It strictly interprets secularism and forces followers to follow a rigid religious life. 
>>> correct  
Since religion and heresy share similar concepts, many followers are deceived and contribute large wealth.
>>> correct   
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