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How do you feel about artificial intelligence-assisted interviews?

작성자: 황*하
2022-07-20 630

회원님의 영작문

If it is not a main evaluation tool, It helps a lot to assess interviees\'s abilities. However, if it is only thing to do interview for hiring, there will be a lot of problem. I believe that computer studied numerous datas so, it\'s evaluation would be good because it will be 100% objective. I really hate that someone assess me without any evidence because he/she might has a sterotype about me, so they use subjective tools to evaluate me. People tend to view what they like when they meet someone. If someone tries to do what interviewer like, he/she might receive an additional points. In Korea, it is also important where we were born, which school we were graduated and familiy name. So, if interviewer and interviewee are from same hometown, school and family, interviewee will get special points.
AI interviews will eliminate these problem, so I am quite pro to use it.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good day, Sir Hwang!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

If it is not a main evaluation tool, It helps a lot to assess interviees\'s abilities. 
>> If it is not a main evaluation tool, it helps a lot to assess interviewee's abilities. 
However, if it is only thing to do interview for hiring, there will be a lot of problem. 
>> However, if the only thing to do is to interview for hiring, there will be a lot of problems. 
I believe that computer studied numerous datas so, it\'s evaluation would be good because it will be 100% objective. 
>> I believe that computer studied numerous data so, it's evaluation would be good because it will be 100% objective. 
I really hate that someone assess me without any evidence because he/she might has a sterotype about me, so they use subjective tools to evaluate me. 
>> I really hate that someone assesses me without any evidence because he/she might have a stereotype about me, so they use subjective tools to evaluate me. 
People tend to view what they like when they meet someone. 
>> CORRECT!
If someone tries to do what interviewer like, he/she might receive an additional points. 
>> If someone tries to do what the interviewer likes, he/she might receive additional points. 
In Korea, it is also important where we were born, which school we were graduated and familiy name.
>> In Korea, it is also important where we were born, which school we graduated from, and family name.
 So, if interviewer and interviewee are from same hometown, school and family, interviewee will get special points.
>> CORRECT!
AI interviews will eliminate these problem, so I am quite pro to use it.
>> AI interviews will eliminate these problems, so I am quite pro to use it.

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