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ESSAY: Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

You make me a weatherman today.
Global warming is a serious problems. it cause disasters such like earthquake, tsunami and melting north pole.
There are so many animals and people suffered from climat change.
If we can find other way to live without hurting earth, I agree.

Anyway, I hope you have a good time with your long term visitors. hihihi
I am wondering what you will serve for dinner tonight?
Cheer Up!

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Hahaha! Yes, Ms. Eunice you'd be the weather forecaster today! Hahaha I remember, I had a student in Korea before and he works as a weather forecaster. Sadly, he quit his job because he was always blamed for his wrong predictions. Hahaha! Well, the weather is like women's mood, our mood changes every time. Hahaha! By the way, I'm thinking of preparing Chicken Adobo tonight for my guests. ;) This cuisine is popular in my country. It's somewhat similar to Bulgogi however, Bulgogi is sweet. Adobo tastes a bit salty because we cook it in soy sauce. ;)
>>> TEACHER GEMMA 
You make me a weatherman today.
>>> You made me a weather forecaster today. 
Global warming is a serious problem. 
>>> CORRECT
it cause disasters such like earthquake, tsunami and melting north pole.
>>> It causes disasters such as earthquake, tsunami and melting north pole.
There are so many animals and people suffered from climat change.
>>> There are so many animals and people suffering from climate change.
If we can find other way to live without hurting earth, I agree.

>>> 
If we can find other ways to live without hurting the earth, I would agree. (LET'S GO TO MARS HAHAHA )
Anyway, I hope you'll have a good time with your long term visitors. hihihi
>>> CORRECT
I am wondering what you will serve for dinner tonight?

Cheer Up!
>>> CORRECT
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