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What¡¯s the best way to travel?

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I think the best way to travel is plane. The best thing is I can look down the world in the sky. It's not common thing.
I like the feel when the plane gose up to the sky.
It can also eat delicious various food.
When you take a first class in expensive airline you can take a shower and sleep in the bed. That is one of my wish list.
And I can visit each other countries airport. It is also one thing of the trip.
But the cons is plane ticket is basically expensive. And you must go to the airport to take a plane. It is complicate process too.
Nevertheless plane makes me excited and heart flutter.

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Hello Eun Chae!
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I think the best way to travel is plane. 
>>I think the best way to travel is by plane. 
The best thing is I can look down the world in the sky.
>> The best thing is that I can look down at the world from the sky. 
 It's not common thing.
>>It's not a common thing. 
I like the feel when the plane gose up to the sky.
>>I like the feeling when the plane goes up in the sky. 
It can also eat delicious various food.
>>I can also eat delicious food. 
When you take a first class in expensive airline you can take a shower and sleep in the bed. 
>>When you take a first class trip on an expensive airline, you can take a shower and sleep on a bed. 
That is one of my wish list.
>>That is on my wish list. 
And I can visit each other countries airport. 
>>And I can visit other countries' airport. 
It is also one thing of the trip.
>>It is also one thing I like on a trip. 
But the cons is plane ticket is basically expensive.
>>But the cons is the plane ticket which is basically expensive. 
 And you must go to the airport to take a plane. 
>>Correct. 
It is complicate process too.
>>It is a complicated process too. 
Nevertheless plane makes me excited and heart flutter.
>>Nevertheless, the plane makes me excited and my heart flutters. 

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