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2022-07-19 189

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Good afternoon, Donna!
This is 2:00 PM here in Korea.
Because the meeting at last night continued so long, I came back home at 2 AM, and then I slept for only 3 hours.
Hence, I am so tired, but I feel very good.
Honestly, I could not focus on the morning class, I am so sorry about it.
Thus I am planning to get a sleep so early this evening.
Oh my..
I forget the meeting this evening.
I wish we could get it done so fast.
Now this is my homework.
I think the best way to learn a language is to talk with someone as many as possible.
Sometimes we made a mistake in telling some words.
But, who cares?
We can achieve our goal just step by step.
Often, I saw that my youngest daughter said something meaningless before.
Because she tried harder and harder, as time goes by, her words and sentences are getting better.
And, we should get over the fear of mistakes in language.
We can grow up through many mistakes.
This is all of my words about the homework.
Is that enough?
Catch you tomorrow.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Good evening, Dr. Kim!

Yes, your answer is always more than enough, thank you very much for the amount of time and effort that you devote in answering your homework. It speaks a lot of your work ethics as well as professinalism.

I apologize for commenting after several hours. Nonetheless, here are my comments and suggestions. First, your expressions such as "Oh my..." and "But, who cares?" are very accurate ones to express strong emotions over something, well done! Then, the use of 'a lot, much, and many" are very specific. Let's discuss them in class soon. Finally, your ideas on how to overcome difficulties in learning a language are actually research based. I am surprised that you know too well the process of children acquiring a language. It comes from your experience as a father, I surmise.

Thus, overall, wonderful job! I will see you soon. Have a very good sleep tonight.

-T. Donna 

Good afternoon, Donna!
>> Correct!

This is 2:00 PM here in Korea.
>> Correct!
Or: It is 2:00 PM here in Korea.

Because the meeting at last night continued so long, I came back home at 2 AM, and then I slept for only 3 hours.
>> Because the meeting last night continued for so long, I came back home at 2 AM, and then I slept for only for 3 hours.

Hence, I am so tired, but I feel very good.
>> Correct!

Honestly, I could not focus on the morning class, I am so sorry about it.
>> Correct!

Thus I am planning to get a sleep so early this evening.
Oh my..
>> Correct!
Or: Thus, I am planning to get sleep so early this evening. Oh my...

I forget the meeting this evening.
>> I forgot the meeting (tonight/ this evening).

I wish we could get it done so fast.
>> Correct!

Now this is my homework.
>> Correct!

I think the best way to learn a language is to talk with someone as many as possible.
>> I think the best way to learn a language is to talk with someone as much as possible.

Sometimes we made a mistake in telling some words.
>> Sometimes we make a mistake in telling some words.

But, who cares?
>> Correct!

We can achieve our goal just step by step.
>> Correct!
Or: We can achieve our goals step by step.

Often, I saw that my youngest daughter said something meaningless before.
>> Often, I see my youngest daughter saying something meaningless before.
Or: I often see my youngest daughter saying something meaningless before./ I see my youngest daughter saying something meaningless often before.

Because she tried harder and harder, as time goes by, her words and sentences are getting better.
>> Correct!

And, we should get over the fear of mistakes in language.
>> Correct!

We can grow up through many mistakes.
>> Correct!

This is all of my words about the homework.
>> These are all what I can say about the homework.

Is that enough?
>> Correct!

Catch you tomorrow.
>> Correct!
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