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I think he airplane and car is the greatest invention for past 200 years. Because, we could go abroad quickly and it is easy to carry conveniently even animals and some items. The ship has also good function for people as a transportation, like they can move a bun of stuffs at once, but it spends so much time. So, in the case of fresh food or frozen food, they would be gone if they transfer with the ship.
So, as the development of airplane, we could have more communication with each country. And, the car makes us to live better life. From Seoul to Busan, it takes more than 10 days on foot. This is crazy. Anyway, that's a really relief to invent reansportation. If I lived before 200 years, I couldn't live and that would be awful life.

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Good evening Hui Woon. Again, thank you for sharing your opinion about this topic. ^_^
T. Irene
I think he airplane and car is the greatest invention for past 200 years. Because, we could go abroad quickly and it is easy to carry conveniently even animals and some items. 
>>> I think the airplane and the car are the greatest inventions in the past 200 years because we could go abroad quickly with the plane. It can easily carry animals and some items too. 
The ship has also good function for people as a transportation, like they can move a bun of stuffs at once, but it spends so much time.
>>> The ship is also a good way to travel and it can carry other things too but it can be very slow. 
 So, in the case of fresh food or frozen food, they would be gone if they transfer with the ship.
>>> Therefore, in case of fresh or even frozen foods, they will rot if transferred via a ship.
So, as the development of airplane, we could have more communication with each country. 
>>> With the development of planes, we can have more access to different countries. 
And, the car makes us to live better life. 
>>> The car also makes our life better.
From Seoul to Busan, it takes more than 10 days on foot. 
>>> It would more than 10 days on foot from Seoul to Busan.  
This is crazy. Anyway, that's a really relief to invent reansportation. 
>>> That would be quite crazy. The invention of modern transportation is really a relief. 
If I lived before 200 years, I couldn't live and that would be awful life.
>>> If I existed some 200 years ago, I would have lived an awful life. 




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