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Good afternoon, Donna!
How was your Monday morning?
I think there are no more bad news in my clinic.
This is our lunch break now and we start our afternoon care at 2:30 PM.
So I am enjoying my freetime after eating a lunch.
As you know it, I have an appointment this evening with my friends who are also doctors.
Thus I am looking forward that meeting so much.
Now this is my homework.
In the last class, you told me that I can speak English well, but I don't think so, I just hope so.
However, there is an improvement in my English skills recently.
I am getting over the fear of mistakes in English everyday with you.
Meanwhile many Koreans are usually afraid about their mistakes of listening and speaking in English.
When we were a baby, we said imperfectly.
Perhaps there are many mistakes, nontheless we just tried to say repeatedly, and finally we got used to it.
To learn a language, all we need to do is keep trying, I think.
I wish I could talk with you more fluently.
Good day~!

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Good evening, Dr. Kim!

I was preoccupied the whole afternoon until I can write my comments here on this essay, than you for asking. It's very good to know about your hassle-free Monday. 

As to your homework, it gives an awkward feeling speaking a different language in your country but it's just an ordinary activity in our country. Our cases are different from each other. However, according to the language theories regarding the 'affective filter', the adult who can let go of mistakes as well as find English useful and fun becomes a successful speaker. You possess these traits, thus, you are a good leanguage learner. I am elated to know that you feel progress for the past few weeks that you have been speaking English. I want to boost your confidence and just break all the barriers that stops you from expressing yourself freely and comfortably without thinking that you would commit a mistake in speaking. Even if you did, you can fix it on your own or just let go of the mistakes since the native speaker commits a lot as well and just never bothers. Do not worry, I understand every word you say.^^

Anyway, did you have a good time with your friends? I am sure you did. Tell me about it in class.

See you in a few.

-T. Donna~

Good afternoon, Donna!
>> Correct!

How was your Monday morning?
>> Correct!

I think there are no more bad news in my clinic.
>> Correct!

This is our lunch break now and we start our afternoon care at 2:30 PM.
>> Correct!

So I am enjoying my freetime after eating a lunch.
>> So I am enjoying my freetime after eating lunch.

As you know it, I have an appointment this evening with my friends who are also doctors.
>> Correct!

Thus I am looking forward that meeting so much.
>> Thus, I am looking forward to that meeting so much.

Now this is my homework.
>> Correct!

In the last class, you told me that I can speak English well, but I don't think so, I just hope so.
>> Correct!

However, there is an improvement in my English skills recently.
>> Correct!

I am getting over the fear of mistakes in English everyday with you.
>> Correct!

Meanwhile many Koreans are usually afraid about their mistakes of listening and speaking in English.
>> Correct!

When we were a baby, we said imperfectly.
>> When we were a baby, we spoke imperfectly.

Perhaps there are many mistakes, nontheless we just tried to say repeatedly, and finally we got used to it.
>> Correct!

To learn a language, all we need to do is keep trying, I think.
>> Correct!

I wish I could talk with you more fluently.
>> Correct!

Good day~!
>> Correct!
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