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Even my husband and I can't very often understand when we talk with my daughters that they use new woeds including salsng, neologisms and abbreviated woeds etc.

Some young generations tent to reject any kinds of consideration and social eitiquette.

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Hello Ms. Lily!
The moment I read your homework I can't help but smile a bit. They have millennial words. I always tell my nieces not to talk with me this way, haha! 
Thank you for this. Talk to you later.
Aki~
Even my husband and I can't very often understand when we talk with my daughters that they use new woeds including salsng, neologisms and abbreviated woeds etc.
>>>Even my husband and I can't very often understand when we talk with my daughters that they use new words including slang, neologisms, abbreviated words, etc.
Some young generations tent to reject any kinds of consideration and social eitiquette.
>>> Some young generations tend to reject any kind of consideration and social etiquette.
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