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umm actually i work in the math acardemy for elementery kids. and also i love my job. becasue every kids sometimes act like devil and sometimes act like angel right? but you know, i teach math for kids who have not good score than same age kids. so they act like devil more often than normal kids. that makes me hard. you know, they really dont want to learn something. but when they do their homework well, and keep silence? its make me happy. so i love this job for this moment

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umm actually i work in the math acardemy for elementery kids. and also i love my job. 
>>I actually work in a math academy for elementary kids so I also love my job. 
becasue every kids sometimes act like devil and sometimes act like angel right? 
>>It is because every kid sometimes acts like a devil and sometimes like an angel.  
but you know, i teach math for kids who have not good score than same age kids. 
>> But you know, I teach math for kids who have bad academic scores compared to the kids the same as their age. 
so they act like devil more often than normal kids. that makes me hard. 
>> So they are more naughty than the normal kids which give me a hard time dealing with them. 
you know, they really dont want to learn something. 
>>You know, they really don't want to learn something. 
but when they do their homework well, and keep silence? 
>>But when they do their homework well and keep quiet, 
its make me happy. 
>>it makes me happy.  
so i love this job for this moment
>> That's why I love this job at the moment. 
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