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I like family occasion of Chuseok. Because, in Chuseok I can meet all of my cousin. Grandparents from father side are have five children. Four daughters and one sons. They are to me aunts, and my father. Also, my family and grandparents live together so, all cousins meet at my home. When Chuseok I can do many fun things with cousin, and it¡¯s a holiday so, I can spend only my time. Therefore, for this reasons I like family occasion of Chuseok.

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Hi Bella!
Another week is over.
I hope you appreciate the fact that you just keep getting better as time passes.
I hope you keep it up.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I like family occasion of Chuseok. 
>> I like the Chuseok holiday.
Because, in Chuseok I can meet all of my cousin. 
>> It's because during Chuseok, I can see all of my cousins.
Grandparents from father side are have five children. 
>> My grandparents from my father's side have five children. 
Four daughters and one sons. 
>> They have four daughters and one son. 
They are to me aunts, and my father. 
>> They are my aunts and my father. 
Also, my family and grandparents live together so, all cousins meet at my home. 
>> My family and my grandparents also live together so all of my cousins gather at my home. 
When Chuseok I can do many fun things with cousin, and it¡¯s a holiday so, I can spend only my time. 
>> In Chuseok, I can do many fun things with my cousin, and it¡¯s a holiday so, I can spend time with myself. 
Therefore, for this reasons I like family occasion of Chuseok.
>> Therefore, for these reasons, I like Chuseok.
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