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The more immunity you have, the less diseases you will get. Making the good immune system is the best way to avoid getting sick. I choose to sleep at least 6 to 7 hours and have vitamin supplements aside from meals.

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Hello, Judy! Good evening.

You are absolutely right. Boosting the immune system such as taking vaccines as well as having a healthy diet and enough sleep truly help us dtrong and fit. Hence, do all that you can to achieve these.

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See you next week!

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The more immunity you have, the less diseases you will get. 
>> Correct!

Making the good immune system is the best way to avoid getting sick. 
>> Having a good immune system is the best way to avoid getting sick. 

I choose to sleep at least 6 to 7 hours and have vitamin supplements aside from meals.
>>  Correct!
Or: I choose to sleep for at least 6 to 7 hours and have vitamins or supplements aside from meals.
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