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Why don¡¯t parents do enough to stop their children from becoming obese?

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What do you think about adults and children with obesity? People are more favorable when it comes to children with obesity than adults with obesity. Because some people say ¡°Children who are maturing should eat abundantly. Even if they are becoming obese, they will lose their weight naturally while growing up height.¡± Like this, people are more generous about children with obesity and they believe that obesity will be going to go forward high tall.

However, parents should remember that severe childhood obesity can be a barrier to growing up.

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Hi, Helena!
I agree with you! When kids are fat, people think they are cute and it's okay compared to adults. This is why sometimes, it's very difficult to control how a child eats once he or she grows up.
-T. Caitlyn
What do you think about adults and children with obesity? 
>>CORRECT
People are more favorable when it comes to children with obesity than adults with obesity. Because some people say ¡°Children who are maturing should eat abundantly. 
>> People are more favorable when it comes to children with obesity than adults with obesity because some people say ¡°Children who are maturing should eat abundantly". 
Even if they are becoming obese, they will lose their weight naturally while growing up height.
>> Even if they are becoming obese, they will lose weight naturally while growing up and they can still get taller.
Like this, people are more generous about children with obesity and they believe that obesity will be going to go forward high tall.
>> Because of this, people are more generous to obese children and they believe that obesity will actually help in the growth of children.
However, parents should remember that severe childhood obesity can be a barrier to growing up.
>> CORRECT
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