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Name one skill or hobby that you\'d like to learn.

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I want to learn Japanese skill above all because COVID restrictions are getting lifted around the world, and I have a plan to go to Japan coming winter vacation or next year's summer vacation. Japan is one of the countries that I want to visit again besides your country.

I don't know if you know well about Japanese people's English skills, they are so bad at English that you should learn basic Japanese to enjoy your visit to Japan.

When I was in Japan, I was surprised to see many people in WASEDA that I met having trouble in English. As you know, WASEDA university is one of the most globally prestigious universities. Far away from capital city, it is more difficult for you to meet people who can speak English a little.

In contrast to Japanese poor English skills, Japanese are very kind to foreigners and there are so charming tour attractions in Japan. Therefore, I want to visit there again, and if possible, I want to communicate with them by learning some Japanese.

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Hello, Steve!^^ Happy Friday!

Thank you so much for this composition. I can tell that you are very keen to communicate in English and that you are making an effort to verbalize your ideas.
In some cultures and often Asian cultures the sounds around them are so completely different to the English sounds, the people's tongues literally grow comfortable in a certain way and it is very difficult to retrain it any other way.

I will see you later in class. Have a good night!^^

__Teacher Mayleen :)


I want to learn Japanese skill above all because COVID restrictions are getting lifted around the world, and I have a plan to go to Japan coming winter vacation or next year's summer vacation. Japan is one of the countries that I want to visit again besides your country.
>>> I want to learn Japanese skills above all because COVID restrictions are getting lifted around the world, and I have a plan to go to Japan this winter vacation or next year's summer vacation. Japan is one of the countries that I want to visit again, besides your country.
>>> OR: The main reason I want to learn Japanese is that COVID limitations are being eliminated all around the world, and I have plans to visit Japan this winter or next summer. In addition to your country, Japan is another I'd like to visit again.

I don't know if you know well about Japanese people's English skills, they are so bad at English that you should learn basic Japanese to enjoy your visit to Japan.
>>> I don't know if you know well about Japanese people's English skills, but they are so bad at English that you should learn basic Japanese to enjoy your visit to Japan.

When I was in Japan, I was surprised to see many people in WASEDA that I met having trouble in English.
>>> When I was in Japan, I was surprised to see many people in WASEDA that I met having trouble with English.
>>> OR: I was shocked to discover that many of the WASEDA acquaintances I made in Japan had problems speaking English.
As you know, WASEDA university is one of the most globally prestigious universities.
>>> As you know, WASEDA University is one of the most prestigious universities in the world.
Far away from capital city, it is more difficult for you to meet people who can speak English a little.
>>> You are far away from the capital city, so it is more difficult for you to meet people who can speak English a little.

In contrast to Japanese poor English skills, Japanese are very kind to foreigners and there are so charming tour attractions in Japan.
>>> In contrast to Japanese people's poor English skills, the Japanese are very kind to foreigners and there are many charming tourist attractions in Japan.
Therefore, I want to visit there again, and if possible, I want to communicate with them by learning some Japanese.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: As a result, I want to go back there and, if I can, communicate with the locals by learning some Japanese.
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