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What do you think are the pros and cons of eating out?

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I prefer eating out. There is some pros of eating out. Eating out serves many services and conveniences. Thesedays, lots of restaurant businesses offer multiple choices that can meet the needs of various people. I don't know about the cons of eating out yet.

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Hi Miss Su Yeon!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille


I prefer eating out. 
>> CORRECT!
There is some pros of eating out. 
>> There are some pros of eating out. 
Eating out serves many services and conveniences. 
>> CORRECT!
Thesedays, lots of restaurant businesses offer multiple choices that can meet the needs of various people. 
>> These days, lots of restaurant businesses offer multiple choices that can meet the needs of various people.
I don't know about the cons of eating out yet.
>> CORRECT!
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