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Imagine you could time travel. Would you go to the past or the future?

작성자: 김*경
2022-07-13 489

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Very interesting question. I would go to the past for better present or future. I have many things to regret about what I did in the past. For example, ‘I should have done this’, ‘I shouldn’t have done that’ or something like that. However, if I could time travel to the past, I could change many things because I already know the result that came from what I did in the past. I could do what I did good better. I wouldn’t do what caused me damages.

In this respect, time traveling to the future benefits me little. Future is just the result from what I did in the past or present. I don’t have many things to do about future for better myself.

However, if many people besides me could time travel, my plan to go back to the past to change my present or future could fail because many people involving to change the past could interact each other’s past, leading to unexpected present or future that nobody wanted to have.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good afternoon, Steve! ^^,)

Thank you so much for accomplishing your homework. You were able to express your thoughts well and I indeed appreciate your efforts.
I will see you later in class. Enjoy the rest of the day!^^

"The best evidence we have that time travel [into the past] is not possible, and never will be, is that we have not been invaded by hordes of tourists from the future." -by: Stephen Hawking

__Teacher Mayleen :)


Very interesting question.
>>> That's a very interesting question.
I would go to the past for better present or future.
>>> I would go to the past for a better present or future.
I have many things to regret about what I did in the past.
>>> I regret a lot of the things I did in the past.
For example, ‘I should have done this’, ‘I shouldn’t have done that’ or something like that.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: For example, "I should have done this," "I shouldn’t have done that" or something like that.
However, if I could time travel to the past, I could change many things because I already know the result that came from what I did in the past.
>>> If I could time travel to the past, I could change many things because I already know the result of what I did in the past.
I could do what I did good better. I wouldn’t do what caused me damages.
>>> I could do what I did well better. I wouldn’t do what caused me damage.

In this respect, time traveling to the future benefits me little.
>>> With this in mind, time travel to the future benefits me a little.
Future is just the result from what I did in the past or present.
>>> The future is just the result of what I have done in the past or present.
I don’t have many things to do about future for better myself.
>>> There aren't many things I can do to better myself in the future.

However, if many people besides me could time travel, my plan to go back to the past to change my present or future could fail because many people involving to change the past could interact each other’s past, leading to unexpected present or future that nobody wanted to have.
>>> However, if many people besides me could time travel, my plan to go back to the past to change my present or future could fail because many people involved in changing the past could interact with each other’s past, leading to an unexpected present or future that nobody wanted to have.
>>> OR: My plan to change my present or future by traveling back in time could fail if many individuals other than me were able to do so because they might interact with each other's pasts, creating an unanticipated present or future that no one intended.
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