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It's raning today in Korea. it is heavy raining in my place now.
Do you know that Korean likes to eat fried food on raning day? We love specially Kimchi Buchimge.
I will let you know how to cook Kimchi Buchimge.
Preparation.
Flour, ripe Kimchi, oil and any vegetables you have.
How to cook
1, Chop Kimchi and vegetables
2. mix flour with water in a bowl
3. Put mincing Kimchi and vegetables into the bowl.
4. mix all together .
5. fry on a pen shaped like a pencake .
Yummy!!!!

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Hi there Ms. Eunice! Thanks for sharing the recipe! I hope I could make it on my own though. Hahaha I'm good at cooking but not as better as my husband. But I like the Korean pancake I tasted which my Korean student cooked for me before. If I'm not mistaken, I think you call it pajeon? Hahaha I'm not so sure. Hahaha. But I also want to try Kimchi Buchimgae. I wish that you're just 5 minutes away from me so I could easily come to your place and taste your cuisine. ;) 
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
It's raning today in Korea. it is heavy raining in my place now.
>>> It's raining cats and dogs in my place now.
Do you know that Korean likes to eat fried food on raning day? 
>>> Do you know that Koreans like eating fried food on rainy days? 
We love specially Kimchi Buchimge.
>>> We  especially love Kimchi Buchimgae.
I will let you know how to cook Kimchi Buchimgae.
>>> CORRECT
Preparation.
Flour, ripe Kimchi, oil and any vegetables you have.
>>> CORRECT
How to cook

1, Chop Kimchi and vegetables.
2. Mix flour with water in a bowl.
3. Put mincing Kimchi and vegetables into the bowl.
4. Mix all together .
5. fry on a pen shaped like a pencake .
>>> Fry on a pan shaped like a pancake .
Yummy!!!!
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