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I think before 40 years old is the best age to get married. But it is not correct answer. If we have someone we really love, there is no problem with age in marriage.

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Hello, Emily! I like your answer. You explained it objectively! See you!-Faith-
I think before 40 years old is the best age to get married. 
>> CORRECT
OR I think the ideal age to get married is in our thirties.
But it is not correct answer. 
>> But, it is not the correct answer at all times. 
If we have someone we really love, there is no problem with age in marriage.
>> If we have someone we really love, then there is no problem with age in marriage.
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