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What is your favorite room in your house? Why?

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There¡¯s many rooms in my house. There are my room, living room, bed room and something like that. But the kinds of rooms could be different from each family. And rooms have different functions.

In my house, my favorite room is a bed room. In a bed room, I can sleep in the bed and also I can rest lying on the bed. And I like to sleep. In the morning, I think that If I could sleep 10 minutes more how happy I would be. So I like bed room the most.

Next, I like watching movies on computer that I like the room with computer in, too. In that room, I can see movies or animations. And all of my family like to watch movies that it is like the hobby of our family.

Lastly, I also like a living room. I study in a living room instead of my room because a living room is more cozy and I want to study with my family, not alone. With my family I can study more happily and funnily. And in my house, the living room is most cool place because the air condition is in the living room.

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Hi, Rana! 

Wow! Very good answer. Your sentence construction are pretty good. Keep it up!
Thank you for answering and have a great evening! See you tomorrow!

~T. Roanne ^_^
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There¡¯s many rooms in my house. 
>> Correct! 
There are my room, living room, bed room and something like that. 
>> There is my room, our living room, bedroom and something like that. 
But the kinds of rooms could be different from each family. And rooms have different functions.
>> Correct! 

In my house, my favorite room is a bed room. 
>> In my house, my favorite room is a bedroom. 
In a bed room, I can sleep in the bed and also I can rest lying on the bed. 
>> In a bedroom, I can sleep in the bed and also I can rest lying on the bed. 
And I like to sleep. 
>> Correct! 
In the morning, I think that If I could sleep 10 minutes more how happy I would be. 
>> Correct! 
So I like bed room the most.
>> So I like bedroom the most.

Next, I like watching movies on computer that I like the room with computer in, too. 
>>Next, I like watching movies on the computer that I like the room with computer , too. 
In that room, I can see movies or animations. 
>> Correct! 
And all of my family like to watch movies that it is like the hobby of our family.
>> Correct! 

Lastly, I also like a living room. 
>> Correct! 
I study in a living room instead of my room because a living room is more cozy and I want to study with my family, not alone. 
>> Correct! 
With my family I can study more happily and funnily. And in my house, the living room is most cool place because the air condition is in the living room.
>> With my family I can study more happily and fun. And in my house, the living room is the coolest place because the air condition is in the living room.
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