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Do you think robots or AI will replace human teachers in the future? Why?

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In my opinion, it could be, but it will be happened a long time later.
If we see a technology about AI, we can let them calculate something, but it is impossible to let other people understand about something.
Because there are a lot of limitations yet about AI technologies.
Because of this reason, I think AI will replace human teacher a long time later.

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Hi John! :) 

I think so too! 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

In my opinion, it could be, but it will be happened a long time later.
>> In my opinion, it could be, but it will happen a long time from now. 

If we see a technology about AI, we can let them calculate something, but it is impossible to let other people understand about something.
>> If we see a technologies about AIs, we can let them calculate something, but it is impossible to let other people understand it. 

Because there are a lot of limitations yet about AI technologies. 
>> It is because they have limitations. 

Because of this reason, I think AI will replace human teacher a long time later.
>> Because of this reason, I think AI will replace human teaches far in the future. 

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