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Only this Wednesday and Thursday, i need to change my time TT
Anyway, this is our today¡¯s questions.
Describe an occasion when someone gave
you positive advice or suggestions about
your work/study
You should say:
Who the person is
What he/she said
How the advice/suggestion affected you
And explain how you felt about the advice/
suggestions

When should parents encourage
their children?
Should parents always encourage
their children?
Do you think negative feedback is more
important than positive feedback? Why?
Why is negative feedback as important as
positive feedback at work or in study?

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Hello there, Alice!

I got these questions! Thank you for sending them and for answering with organized and systematic information. 

See you again soon.

-T. Donna =)

Only this Wednesday and Thursday, i need to change my time TT
Anyway, this is our today¡¯s questions.
>> Only this Wednesday and Thursday, I need to change my time.
Anyway, this are today¡¯s questions.

Describe an occasion when someone gave
you positive advice or suggestions about
your work/study
You should say:
Who the person is
What he/she said
How the advice/suggestion affected you
And explain how you felt about the advice/
suggestions
>> Describe an occasion when someone gave
you positive advice or suggestions about
your work/study.
You should say:
Who the person is;
What he/she said;
How the advice/suggestion affected you
And explain how you felt about the advice/
suggestions.


When should parents encourage
their children?
Should parents always encourage
their children?
Do you think negative feedback is more
important than positive feedback? Why?
Why is negative feedback as important as
positive feedback at work or in study?
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