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Which greeting kind of annoys you?

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I have two things that greeting kind of annoys me.

First, when I meet stranger or new people. They speak informally. I guess, they think that I'm younger than their. I think that behavior is rude. Even I'm younger, it is etiquette.
I want to respect from strangers.

Second thing is looking up and down when we greeting. It's make me confused. I might think they don't like me. And some people are stare fiercery me. It's little bit scared. I don't know why don't like me even they don't know me. It's a special situation. It's not common. But it is really exist that people.

Last month, I prepared to go home at the company. I greet the other team crew. I say 'good bye. Be careful to go home.'
It's common expression in Korea. But she didn't see me. She just stare at floor and said 'yeah...'. So Iwas very embarrassed and getting scared greet to her. That's my one of the bad memories.

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Hello Eun Chae!
You have some good sentences, but remember to memorize those correct sentences suggested.   If you have questions, let me know in class.  Have a great day! ^^


~T. Maine


I have two things that greeting kind of annoys me.
>> I have two situations with greetings that kind of annoy me. 
First, when I meet stranger or new people. 
>>First is when I meet strangers. 
They speak informally. 
>>Correct. 
I guess, they think that I'm younger than their. 
>>I guess, they think I'm younger than them. 
I think that behavior is rude. 
>>Correct. 
Even I'm younger, it is etiquette.
>> Even if I'm younger, it is an etiquette. 
I want to respect from strangers.
>>I want respect from strangers. 
Second thing is looking up and down when we greeting. 
>>Second thing is looking someone up and down when we greet.  
It's make me confused.
>> It makes me confused. 
I might think they don't like me. 
>>Correct. 
And some people are stare fiercery me.
>>And some people stare at me fiercely. 
 It's little bit scared. I don't know why don't like me even they don't know me. 
>>It's a little bit scary because I don't know why they don't like me even though we are strangers. 
It's a special situation.  It's not common. 
>>Correct.  (Choose only one sentence because they mean the same.^^)

But it is really exist that people.
>> But it really exists among people. 
Last month, I prepared to go home at the company. 
>> Last month, I prepared to go home from the company.
I greet the other team crew. 
>>I greeted another team member. 
I say 'good bye. Be careful to go home.'
>> I said goodbye and be careful when they go home. 
It's common expression in Korea. 
>> It's a common expression in Korea. 
But she didn't see me. 
>>Correct. 
She just stare at floor and said 'yeah...'. 
>>She just stared at the floor and said yeah. 
So Iwas very embarrassed and getting scared greet to her. 
>>So I was very embarrassed and got scared to greet her. 
That's my one of the bad memories.
>> That's one of my bad memories. 

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