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It was very nice to meet you today.
When I heard your name . your name reminds me a song.
Title is 'Faith' sung by George Michael. Have your heard that song?
when I was in my twenty's I really loved that singer.
He was so hot to me at that times. hihihihi
If you have never heard the song, Why don't you hear the song? there must be music video too,

Have a wonderful day!

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Hello, Eunice! Wow! Thank you for introducing this song to me. I listened to it right after reading your homework, and it is nice. It is good for dancing! I guess George Michael was your ultimate crush because he was so hot, hehe! I was also glad meeting you! See you later!-Faith-
It was very nice to meet you today.
>> CORRECT
When I heard your name . your name reminds me a song.
>> When I heard your name, it reminded me of a song.
Title is 'Faith' sung by George Michael. 
>> The title is 'Faith' sung by George Michael. 
Have your heard that song?
>> Have you heard that song?
OR Have you come across this song?
when I was in my twenty's I really loved that singer.
>> When I was in my twenties, I really loved that singer.
He was so hot to me at that times. hihihihi
>> He was so hot to me at that time, hihi!
If you have never heard the song, Why don't you hear the song? 
>> If you have never heard that song yet, then I wonder why?
there must be music video too,
>> There must be a music video, too.
Have a wonderful day!
>> CORRECT
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