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What is one good choice you made lately? Answer in a few sentences.

I recently bought a few of books so, I have been reading. It's best choice I made lately becuase these are so fun and valuable. I thought about buying it or not, but It is always right to do like the saying "Just do it!".

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Hi there, Hae Ju!

What a great decision! Improving ourselves is the best way we can serve and help others too someday. I hope that you can share in class some wisdom you got from the books that you read. 

Your sentences show very good grammar patterns as well as meanigful messages. read them carefully and study my suggestions. Keep up the good work always!

See you! Have a very good noon.

-T. Donna ~

I recently bought a few of books so, I have been reading. 
>> Correct!

It's best choice I made lately becuase these are so fun and valuable. 
>> It's the best choice I made lately becuase these are so fun and valuable. 

I thought about buying it or not, but It is always right to do like the saying "Just do it!".
>> Correct!
Or: I had second thoughts about buying it or not, but It is always right to do just like the saying "Just do it!".
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