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Aside from necessities, what one thing could you not go a day without?

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There must be many things for us to live with. For example, water, air, food and something like that. I need these necessities to live. But what we need for a living can be different from each other.

What I need to live everyday are the following:
First, I need my family. I can feel lots of love from my family and do many funny things with my family together. And all family members give me comfort and leisure.

Next, I need books to read because I enjoy reading books very much and I have been reading books almost everyday. The books give me fun and lots of beneficial knowledge that I can use in school test. So I enjoy reading books very much.

Lastly, I need hobbies, too. I can find my talents and develop them through hobby activities and whenever I enjoy my hobbies, I can feel comfortable and free. And hobbies help me to relieve stress and they help me to smile. In this respect, hobbies are so important in my life.

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Hi, Rana!

Thank you for sharing and answering the question. See you later!

~T. Roanne ^_^
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There must be many things for us to live with. 
>> Correct! 
For example, water, air, food and something like that. 
>> Correct! 
I need these necessities to live. But what we need for a living can be different from each other.
>> Correct! 

What I need to live everyday are the following:
>> Correct! 
First, I need my family. 
>> Correct! 
I can feel lots of love from my family and do many funny things with my family together. 
>> Correct! 
And all family members give me comfort and leisure.
>> Correct! 

Next, I need books to read because I enjoy reading books very much and I have been reading books almost everyday. 
>> Next, I need books to read because I enjoy reading books very much and I have been reading books almost every day. 
The books give me fun and lots of beneficial knowledge that I can use in school test. 
>> Correct! 
So I enjoy reading books very much.
>> Correct! 

Lastly, I need hobbies, too. 
>> Correct! 
I can find my talents and develop them through hobby activities and whenever I enjoy my hobbies, I can feel comfortable and free. 
>> Correct! 
And hobbies help me to relieve stress and they help me to smile. 
>> Correct! 
In this respect, hobbies are so important in my life.
>> Correct! 
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