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What was the most memorable gift you have given or received? Why?

작성자: 김*연
2022-07-09 667

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The most memorable gift I received is a plaque by my students. I received it last teacher's day. 21 students who are in my book club members gathered their mind about me and prepared it. I think it is a symbol. I worked in this school for 8 years now. And you know, I will leave here next year. So I felt it is a really thankful prize of encouragement about my life in this school. I have never received that kinds of plaque from my students. Even thouth I received so many letters and cards from my students but this one is the first. So it is the most memorable gift for me as a meaning in that. I can feel that there are my student's encouragement, thankful mind, faith and acknowledgment about me. (I attached it!!!)
For given thinngs, it is only my opinion but I think the car for my mom recently. I gave a car that my mom wants and she looks so happy. I thought she will need to feel her own car instead of family car. ^^

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Arissa! 

It's an awesome gift! I believe that it's priceless.
You're working hard and you're always sincere to your students.
I think they were able to clearly see and feel those.  
Being appreciated by your students this way, is a wonderful and worthwhile gift. ^^ 

You're also a very nice daughter for giving her such valuable gift. 

Your students and loved ones are very lucky to have you. ^^ 

~ Teacher Gina


The most memorable gift I received is a plaque by my students. I received it last teacher's day. 21 students who are in my book club members gathered their mind about me and prepared it. I think it is a symbol. I worked in this school for 8 years now. And you know, I will leave here next year. So I felt it is a really thankful prize of encouragement about my life in this school. I have never received that kinds of plaque from my students. Even thouth I received so many letters and cards from my students but this one is the first. So it is the most memorable gift for me as a meaning in that. I can feel that there are my student's encouragement, thankful mind, faith and acknowledgment about me. (I attached it!!!)
For given thinngs, it is only my opinion but I think the car for my mom recently. I gave a car that my mom wants and she looks so happy. I thought she will need to feel her own car instead of family car. ^^

>> The most memorable gift I received was a plaque by my students. I received it last teacher's day. Twenty-one students in my book club gathered their thoughts about me and prepared it. I think it is a symbol. I have worked in this school for eight years now. And you know, I will leave here next year. So I felt it is a really thankful prize of encouragement in my life in this school. I have never received that kind of plaque from my students. Even though I received so many letters and cards from my students, this one is the first. So it is the most memorable gift for me as it has meaning. I can feel that there are my student's encouragement, thankful mind, faith, and acknowledgment of me. (I attached it!!!)
For given things, it is only my opinion, but I think the car for my mom recently. I got a car my mom wanted, and she looked so happy. I thought she needed to own her own car instead of a family car. ^^
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