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What is your favorite plant or flower? Why?

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My favorite flower is rose. Actually, the rose is common, but I'm not boring about it. Especially the red rose is attractive and good to make it dry flower. So sometimes I make it dry and hang it up across the wall. It has nice smell, too. When I went to the rose park in my country, I felt happy to smell the natural rose perfume. So I love to buy rose purfume. Moreover, I saw the rose vane in the cartoon book 'Candy Candy'. It was so wonderful. So I hope to have the rose vane gate in my house someday like the attached photo. Last, I want to mention about the rose's thorn. Someone said rose is dangerous because of the thorn, but I don't agree with it. I think the harmony of a beautiful flower and fatal thron is fantastic. It looks soft, warm, sharp and reasonable. So I like the thron with rose. I think it means that people don't manage the rose indiscreetly.

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Thank you, Arissa! 

Roses are indeed beautiful and fragrant. My mom loves them too especially red roses. 
Oh, the pictures you sent are so lovely. It feels classic and Disney at the same time. 
I also agree with you regarding the thorns. It really help the roses to be taken care of carefully by the people.
It's like their defense for those who just carelessly pick them. ~ 

~ Teacher Gina

My favorite flower is rose. Actually, the rose is common, but I'm not boring about it. Especially the red rose is attractive and good to make it dry flower. So sometimes I make it dry and hang it up across the wall. It has nice smell, too. When I went to the rose park in my country, I felt happy to smell the natural rose perfume. So I love to buy rose purfume. Moreover, I saw the rose vane in the cartoon book 'Candy Candy'. It was so wonderful. So I hope to have the rose vane gate in my house someday like the attached photo. Last, I want to mention about the rose's thorn. Someone said rose is dangerous because of the thorn, but I don't agree with it. I think the harmony of a beautiful flower and fatal thron is fantastic. It looks soft, warm, sharp and reasonable. So I like the thron with rose. I think it means that people don't manage the rose indiscreetly.

>> My favorite flower is the rose. Actually, the rose is common, but I'm not bored with it. Especially the red rose is attractive and good for making a dry flower. So sometimes, I dry it and hang it across the wall. It has a nice smell, too. When I went to the rose park in my country, I felt happy to smell the natural rose perfume. So I love to buy rose perfume.
Moreover, I saw the rose vine in the cartoon book 'Candy Candy.' It was so wonderful. So I hope to have the rose vine gate in my house someday like the attached photo. Last, I want to mention the rose's thorn. Someone said rose is dangerous because of the thorn, but I don't agree with it. I think the harmony between a beautiful flower and a fatal thorn is fantastic. It looks soft, warm, sharp, and reasonable. So I like the rose with a thorn. I think it means that people don't manage the rose indiscreetly.
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