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Where do you think is the best vacation place for you? Why?

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I prefer the luxury hotel located in the beach. I traveled several places before but these days it is not good to go out because of the weather. Usually my vacation is on the hot summer or cold winter. And I think the weather was getting worse than the past. So I love to enjoy the Hocance. When you stay at hotel, you can eat the wonderful breakfast! Those are usually buffet, so we can eat what we want to eat freely. And you can take a good rest in the pleasant environment. Sometimes I wonder why I cannot make my home with the pleasant air by air-conditioner. Even I set it in the PMV mode, I cannot feel the same with hotel. So I think staying in luxury hotel during vacation is the best choice!!!

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Hi Arissa,

This is a lovely kind of vacation. People also call it staycation and I think it's cool to try.
I also want to try it even just for a night. I think it's going to be a good memory. ^^ 

~ Teacher Gina


I prefer the luxury hotel located in the beach. I traveled several places before but these days it is not good to go out because of the weather. Usually my vacation is on the hot summer or cold winter. And I think the weather was getting worse than the past. So I love to enjoy the Hocance. When you stay at hotel, you can eat the wonderful breakfast! Those are usually buffet, so we can eat what we want to eat freely. And you can take a good rest in the pleasant environment. Sometimes I wonder why I cannot make my home with the pleasant air by air-conditioner. Even I set it in the PMV mode, I cannot feel the same with hotel. So I think staying in luxury hotel during vacation is the best choice!!!

>> I prefer the luxury hotel located on the beach. I traveled to several places before, but these days it is not good to go out because of the weather. Usually, my vacation is in the hot summer or cold winter. And I think the weather was getting worse than in the past. So I love to enjoy the Hocance. When you stay at a hotel, you can eat a wonderful breakfast! Those are usually a buffet, so we can eat what we want to eat freely. And you can take a good rest in the pleasant environment. Sometimes I wonder why I cannot make my home with the pleasant air from the air-conditioner. Even if I set it in the PMV mode, I cannot feel the same with a hotel. So I think staying in a luxury hotel during vacation is the best choice!!!
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