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Do you think you can be a role model?

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My role model is Christopher Nolan. He is a movie director. He made a lot a movie. For example, Interstellar, Dunkirk, TENET..
I saw all his movies. He has unique style. He's movie stories are non mainstream. He talk about time and life. His movies always give me the inspiration. At one time, I want to become a movie director like him. But now, I want to live like his life.
He always write something and think about lives. He write movie scenario for 10 years. He also know well about universe and science fiction. And he can expressed in the art of the movie.
His movies are surprised to me.
I know that I can't be a world renowned master like him. But I want to try to be him for my all life. I want to give inspiration for other people. That's my goal of my life.

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Hello Eun Chae!
Read the corrections and try to make more sentences for your improvement.  You are on the right track! ^^

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My role model is Christopher Nolan. 
>>Correct.
He is a movie director. He made a lot a movie. 
>>He is a movie director who made a lot of movies. 
For example, Interstellar, Dunkirk, TENET..
>> His movies are Interstellar, Dunkirk, TENET and many more. 
I saw all his movies. He has unique style. 
>>I saw all his movies and I think they have uniqueness. 
He's movie stories are non mainstream. 
>>His movies are nonmainstream. 
He talk about time and life. 
>>He talks about time and life. 
His movies always give me the inspiration. 
>>His movies always give me inspiration. 
At one time, I want to become a movie director like him. 
>>Correct. 
But now, I want to live like his life.
>>But now, I want to live like him. 
He always write something and think about lives.
>>He always writes something and thinks about lives. 
 He write movie scenario for 10 years. 
>>He writes movies for 10 years. 
He also know well about universe and science fiction. 
>>He also knows well about the universe and science fiction. 
And he can expressed in the art of the movie.
>>And he can express the art of movie very well. 
His movies are surprised to me.
>>His movies surprise me. 
I know that I can't be a world renowned master like him. 
>>I know that I can't be a world-renowned movie maker like him. 
But I want to try to be him for my all life. 
>>But I want to try to be like him all my life. 
I want to give inspiration for other people. 
>>I want to inspire all people. 
That's my goal of my life.
>>That's my goal in life. 

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