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first of all, i love my room because it also ready for my rest. inside of my room, i have a bed, wide desk, comfortable chair and air conditioner. i am organized person so i placed everything as i like. that why i feel comfortable when i rest in my room. and you know what i really like about my room is an air conditioner. this summer, you know, really hot so i always keep my room cool with using air conditioner maybe it is part of my life now

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Hello Robin!
Your answer is what the question is looking for.  But you have to remember the use of articles when telling about things which are only one in your room.  And know the difference of using an, a, or the.  Keep on learning! ^^


~T. Maine

first of all, i love my room because it also ready for my rest. 
>>First of all, I love my room because it is always ready for my rest time. 
inside of my room, i have a bed, wide desk, comfortable chair and air conditioner. 
>>Inside of my room, I have a bed, a wide desk, a comfortable chair, and an air conditioner. 
i am organized person so i placed everything as i like. 
>>I am an organized person so I placed everything in order. 
that why i feel comfortable when i rest in my room. 
>>That's why I feel comfortable when I rest in my room. 
and you know what i really like about my room is an air conditioner. 
>>In addition to this, you know what I really like about my room is the air conditioner. 
this summer, you know, really hot so i always keep my room cool with using air conditioner maybe it is part of my life now
>> This summer, you know, is really hot so I always keep my room cool using the air conditioner.  And maybe it is already a part of my life now. 
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