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Can curfews lead to arguments between parents and teens?

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Curfews can be a middle controversial subject between parents and teens. In South Korea, almost every teen participated in private education such as academies. Teens generally go to academies after school. There is no choice but to come back home late time. If teens do not do homework, they should stay longer time at academies. However, some parents tend to misunderstand that their children played with their friends. And these arguments can be connected to curfews.

The most important thing is that parents always worry about the safety of their children. Arguments also come from worries. If teens can consider the emotions of parents, arguments can be reduced.

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Hi, Helena!
I agree that parents sometimes have doubts about their kids' whereabouts, thus implementing curfews. This can result in conflict between parents and kids.
-T. Caitlyn
Curfews can be a middle controversial subject between parents and teens. 
>> Curfews can be a common controversial subject between parents and teens. 
In South Korea, almost every teen participated in private education such as academies. 
>> CORRECT
Teens generally go to academies after school. 
>> CORRECT
There is no choice but to come back home late time.
>> There is no choice but to go back home late.
If teens do not do homework, they should stay longer time at academies. 
>> If teens do not do homework, they should stay longer at academies. 
However, some parents tend to misunderstand that their children played with their friends. 
>> CORRECT
And these arguments can be connected to curfews.
>> These arguments can be connected to curfews.
The most important thing is that parents always worry about the safety of their children. 
>> CORRECT
Arguments also come from worries. 
>> CORRECT
If teens can consider the emotions of parents, arguments can be reduced.
>> If teens can consider the emotions of their parents, arguments can be reduced.
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