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If I were a visitor to your house, what customs should I do? Answer in a few sentences.

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Visitors should prepare a gift for a host to express their gratitude because the awareness of visiting with empty hands is regarded as no manner. They also have to clean up after yourself.

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Good evening, Judy!

Most Asian countries regard gifts brought to visit someone's home is a very kind gesture. I would expect something too when you come to my home! ^^

The point here is to express warmth and gratitude for welcoming you in someone's private place. Thus, a simple pot luck or token would do. I would bring some wine and sumptuous food in case.

Your first sentence was excellent. On the second sentence, since you used the preposition 'they' then the possessive pronoun is 'themselves'. 

Thank you so much for your diligence and hard work in doing this task. See you soon!

-T. Donna ~

Visitors should prepare a gift for a host to express their gratitude because the awareness of visiting with empty hands is regarded as no manner. 
>> Correct!

They also have to clean up after yourself.
>> They also have to clean up after themselves.
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