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Good afternoon, Donna!
Did you have a sumptuous lunch?
I ate grilled makerel and seasoning braised pollack for my lunch.
I was so satisfied with that foods.
And I wonder what you usually have for meals.
Homework:
As I told you, I have a family composed of wife, 3 daughters and I.
Sometimes we meet my parents and my brother's family, and sometimes we also meet my wife's parents and her sisters' families.
Meanwhile I have just one brother who live in Pa-Ju city and has 2 daughters.
And my wife has 2 sisters, both of them are married. My wife is the oldest of siblings.
One of her sisters lives in Jeon-Ju city and has 2 sons, and the other lives in In-cheon city and is pregnant.
Actually I prefer extended family meeting of my wife's, because she feels more comfortable in her family.
Meanwhile my cousin who is a woman will get married on this Saturday.
Therefore I will meet many relatives. Especially I look forward to meeting my cousin who live in Cheong- Ju city and is a dentist.
Thanks~

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Hello, Dr. Kim! Good late afternoon!

Yes, I did have a tasty lunch, not quite as scrumptious and grand as yours but I cooked it, needless to say, I had no choice.^^ I made a traditional chicken stew however, and I will devour it for supper.

Anyway, it is amazing how clear you described your family tree below. Most often than not, students lack words to describe their family since culturally, we have different names for relatives or ways of calling them. So, well done on that part.  

Since you have one big happy family that is closely knit to each member, events and occasions are inevitable and your presence is a must. Then, best wishes to your cousin in advance and have a lovely time on Saturday during the wedding!

You've done excellent on this homework. Take note that numbers one to ten (1-10) are written in words when composing sentences and 11 and above may be in numbers as long as they do not begin the sentence. Thank you very much as well.

Catch you soon.

-T. Donna ~

Good afternoon, Donna!
>> Correct!

Did you have a sumptuous lunch?
>> Correct!

I ate grilled makerel and seasoning braised pollack for my lunch.
>> Correct!
Or: mackerel / seasoned brained pollack

I was so satisfied with that foods.
>> I was so satisfied with those foods.

And I wonder what you usually have for meals.
>> Correct!

Homework:

As I told you, I have a family composed of wife, 3 daughters and I.
>> As I told you, I have a family composed of my wife, three daughters and I.

Sometimes we meet my parents and my brother's family, and sometimes we also meet my wife's parents and her sisters' families.
>> Correct!

Meanwhile I have just one brother who live in Pa-Ju city and has 2 daughters.
>> Meanwhile, I have just one brother who lives in Pa-Ju City and has two daughters.

And my wife has 2 sisters, both of them are married. My wife is the oldest of siblings.
>> My wife has two sisters, both of them are married. My wife is the oldest of the siblings.

One of her sisters lives in Jeon-Ju city and has 2 sons, and the other lives in In-cheon city and is pregnant.
>> One of her sisters lives in Jeon-Ju City and has two sons, and the other lives in In-cheon City and is pregnant.

Actually I prefer extended family meeting of my wife's, because she feels more comfortable in her family.
>> Actually, I prefer extended family meetings in my wife's family, because she feels more comfortable with them.

Meanwhile my cousin who is a woman will get married on this Saturday.
>> Meanwhile my cousin who is a woman will get married this Saturday.
Or: Meanwhile my cousin who is a woman will get married on Saturday.

Therefore I will meet many relatives. 
>> Correct!

Especially I look forward to meeting my cousin who live in Cheong- Ju city and is a dentist.
Thanks~
>> Especially, I look forward meeting my cousin who lives in Cheong- Ju City and is a dentist.

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