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I agree that we try to look for a better job and choose a new major.

But I don't agree they enter to medical school to gain stability and high salary without the risk of being laid off.

Doctors are required to have high professional ability, humanism and moral responsibility.

It is about saving other's lives.,

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Hello Ms. Lily!
Thank you for this. I was thinking of that too, that the motive of gaining medical certificate is because of stability and high salary. I was looking for the "compassion to people" especially after the Covid19 situation where almost everyone was affected.
Have a good afternoon.
Aki~
I agree that we try to look for a better job and choose a new major.
>>> CORRECT!
But I don't agree they enter to medical school to gain stability and high salary without the risk of being laid off.
>>>  But I don't agree they enter medical school to gain stability and a high salary without the risk of being laid off.
Doctors are required to have a high professional ability, humanism, and moral responsibility.
>>> CORRECT!
It is about saving others' lives.
>>> CORRECT!
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