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What do you like to watch on TV?

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In the TV, there are so many programs. And, there can be fun programs that I like, but there can be boring programs to me. As a matter of fact, I don¡¯t have TV in my house because my mom and dad don¡¯t want me to waste much time in watching TV. So when I visited my grandparent's house with a big TV, I always watched what I wanted to watch on TV. When I watch TV in my grandparent's house, my mom says to me that I am so much into it. However, I have more programs that I want to watch during my staying in my grandmother's because at home I can¡¯t watch TV. I like to watch comedy show on TV because when I laugh loudly, I can relieve stress. The comedy show is my favorite TV program. But my brother doesn't like this program, so sometimes I argue with him which program to see because our favorite programs are totally different. Fortunately, my dad also likes to watch comedy show that he sticks up for me.

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Hi, Rana!

Comedy programs are always the best to relieve stress. I also understand why you're parents don't allow you to watch TV. Anyway, thank you for sharing and see you later.

Have a nice day!

~T. Roanne ^_^
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In the TV, there are so many programs. 
>> On the TV, there are so many programs. 
And, there can be fun programs that I like, but there can be boring programs to me. 
>> Correct! 
As a matter of fact, I don¡¯t have TV in my house because my mom and dad don¡¯t want me to waste much time in watching TV. 
>> As a matter of fact, I don¡¯t have a TV in my house because my mom and dad don¡¯t want me to waste much time in watching TV. 
So when I visited my grandparent's house with a big TV, I always watched what I wanted to watch on TV. 
>> Correct! 
When I watch TV in my grandparent's house, my mom says to me that I am so much into it.
>> Correct! 
However, I have more programs that I want to watch during my staying in my grandmother's because at home I can¡¯t watch TV. 
>> However, I have more programs that I want to watch during my stay in my grandmother's because at home I can¡¯t watch TV. 
I like to watch comedy show on TV because when I laugh loudly, I can relieve stress. 
>> Correct! 
The comedy show is my favorite TV program. 
>> Correct! 
But my brother doesn't like this program, so sometimes I argue with him which program to see because our favorite programs are totally different. 
>> But my brother doesn't like this program, so sometimes I argue with him, which program to see because our favorite programs are totally different. 
Fortunately, my dad also likes to watch comedy show that he sticks up for me.
>> Fortunately, my dad also likes to watch a comedy show that he sticks up for me.
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