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When I go on a trip, I sleep late. Whenever that happens, I go to the 24/7 convenience store. I buy snacks and beverages.

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Convenience stores are helpful under this circumstance, Emily! However, just like what you have said, it is not economical. It is still better to go to the supermarkets or marts. See you in a short while!-Faith-
When I go on a trip, I sleep late. 
>> CORRECT
Whenever that happens, I go to the 24/7 convenience store. 
>> Whenever that happens, I go to a 24/7 convenience store. 
OR Consequently, I go to a 24/7 convenience store. 
I buy snacks and beverages.
>> I buy snacks and beverages there.
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