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I read books once on one week. Because I have reading academy. Before I go to that academy, I should read that week¡¯s book. I don¡¯t like books, but I don¡¯t hate reading books. I think the way, make someone hate about reading books to like reading is recommend that person¡¯s taste books. Like horror, romance, thriller, or comedy. I don¡¯t like books either, but I like reading books when I read my taste¡¯s book. Therefore, someone hate reading books is start reading books for that person¡¯s taste genre and next try other books. I think this way can make good effect.

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Hi Bella!
What a fruitful week we had.
Let's be grateful for the improvements we have made.
Keep working hard and developing yourself.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I read books once on one week. 
>> I read books once in one week. 
Because I have reading academy. 
>> It's because I go to a reading academy. 
Before I go to that academy, I should read that week¡¯s book. 
>> Correct
I don¡¯t like books, but I don¡¯t hate reading books. 
>> Correct
I think the way, make someone hate about reading books to like reading is recommend that person¡¯s taste books. 
>> I think the way to make a person who hates books like reading is to recommend something suitable to his or her taste. 
Like horror, romance, thriller, or comedy. 
>> It could be horror, romance, thriller, or comedy. 
I don¡¯t like books either, but I like reading books when I read my taste¡¯s book. 
>> I don¡¯t like books either, but I like reading books when I read a story that I like. 
Therefore, someone hate reading books is start reading books for that person¡¯s taste genre and next try other books. 
>> Therefore, someone who hates reading books can start reading ones he or she likes and then try reading other kinds of books. 
I think this way can make good effect.
>> I think this way can lead to a good result. 
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