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HOMEWORK:
Does putting on makeup make you feel more beautiful? Answer in a few sentences.

I don't always wear full - makeup. But I enjoy doing sometime. Makeup gives me confidence and good feeling sometime when I meet my friends, go on a date, or go shopping.

Thank you Donna! Have a great weekend.

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Good evening, Hae Ju!

Putting make up means being prepared to be seen by others especially when they are our colleagues or associates. Thus, we have to wear it appropriately in every occasion. 

Thank you very  much for this homework answer. I combined your two short sentences for the first part and  inserted the article 'a' and removed 'sometimes' on the second sentence since you used it on your first sentence.

Have a very happy weekend!

See you next week.

-T. Donna =)

I don't always wear full - makeup. But I enjoy doing sometime. 
>> I don't always wear full makeup but I enjoy doing it sometimes. 

Makeup gives me confidence and good feeling sometime when I meet my friends, go on a date, or go shopping.
>> Makeup gives me confidence and a good feeling  when I meet my friends, go on a date, or go shopping.

Thank you Donna! Have a great weekend.
>> Correct!
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