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My Interview story (I will send answers of the questions in skype.)

작성자: 유*영
2022-06-30 234

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I had a phone interview at lunch time. I'm not sure whether I got accepted. Actually, I already had expected English questions. But, in the interview,It was "There is a advice you got from manager or coworker." It was hard to talk advice episod better than speak in English. The English question was just one. After speaking English answer, I had a regret. So, I spoke interviewer that I have studied English every day using on-line class and app. If I get a pass, there are two interviews. Fist, there is a interview with a Marketing manager. Second, Interview with head of the depart. The head of the depart is a foreigner. It will be going under English. How about we prepare the English interview in on-line class. Independently the feedback, I should prepare the English interview. When I just finished the interview, my feeing was like "OMG, what I told that." I talk with my close coworker. I told the story. at that time, when I reviewed the interview, I thought that It was not bad?!

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Young! 

Thank you for sending! Have a good night!

~T. Roanne ^_^
========================================
I had a phone interview at lunch time. 
>> Correct! 
I'm not sure whether I got accepted. 
>> Correct! 
Actually, I already had expected English questions. 
>> Correct! 
But, in the interview, It was "There is a advice you got from manager or coworker." 
>> But, in the interview, I was asked "If there was an advice I got from a manager or a coworker." OR But, in the interview, I was asked "If there was any advice I got from a manager or a coworker."
It was hard to talk advice episod better than speak in English. 
>> It was hard to express the advice in English.
The English question was just one. 
>> Correct! 
After speaking English answer, I had a regret. 
>> After saying the English answer, I had a regret. OR After answering in English, I had regrets.
So, I spoke interviewer that I have studied English every day using on-line class and app. 
>> So, I told the interviewer that I am studying English every day through an online class and an app. 
If I get a pass, there are two interviews. 
>> If I pass, there are two more interviews.  Or If I pass, there will be two more follow-up interviews. 
Fist, there is a interview with a Marketing manager. 
>> First, there is an interview with a Marketing manager. 
Second, Interview with head of the depart. 
>> Second, an interview with head of the department. 
The head of the depart is a foreigner. 
>> The head of the department is a foreigner. 
It will be going under English. 
>> It will be in English. OR The interview will be in English.
How about we prepare the English interview in on-line class. 
>> How about we prepare the English interview in the online class?
Independently the feedback, I should prepare the English interview. 
>> Independently the feedback, I should prepare for the English interview. 
When I just finished the interview, my feeing was like "OMG, what I told that." 
>>When I just finished the interview, my feeing was like "OMG, what did I say?"
I talk with my close coworker. I told the story. 
>>I talk with my closest coworker and I told her the story. 
at that time, when I reviewed the interview, I thought that It was not bad?!
>> At that time, when I reviewed the interview, I thought that it was not bad?!

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