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What and who are your major influences for having your recent interests?

작성자: 김*경
2022-06-29 614

회원님의 영작문

I do it just because I do want to do it.
Recently I started to learn calligraphy and table tennis, intrigued by my own personal tastes, not being advised or encouraged by others. I think I am the type that is little influenced by others.

However, come to think of it, I have a passion behind it to do something above others. As a matter of fact, I don’t have particular skills or talents to brag about. Therefore I decided to learn to have some skills above others before it’s too late. As you know, the older we get, the harder we acquire some skills. If I practice one thing steadily, I bet I can get the skill to a considerable level which is good enough even to teach others.

For the better or for the worse, time goes by fast. I will reap what I sow. I want to have plentiful harvests when I reap in areas of my life consisting of work and personal life broadly. As I do my best to achieve as much as possible in my work, so I want to have personal achievements.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Passion fuels you. It’s always better to learn or do something if you are driven by passion because no matter how fast or slow your progress is, you will keep on pushing forward. Great work on this Steve. - Teacher Ivy.
I do it just because I do want to do it.

>> I do it just because I want to.
Recently I started to learn calligraphy and table tennis, intrigued by my own personal tastes, not being advised or encouraged by others.

>> Recently I started learning calligraphy and table tennis because it intrigued my own personal taste, not because I was advised or encouraged by others.

I think I am the type that is little influenced by others.
>> I think I am the type that may be influenced by others.
However, come to think of it, I have a passion behind it to do something above others.

>> However, come to think of it, I have a passion behind doing something above others.

As a matter of fact, I don’t have particular skills or talents to brag about.

>> Correct  

Therefore I decided to learn to have some skills above others before it’s too late.

>> Therefore I decided to learn, to have some skills above others before it’s too late.

As you know, the older we get, the harder we acquire some skills.

>> As you know, the older we get, the harder it is to acquire some skills.

If I practice one thing steadily, I bet I can get the skill to a considerable level which is good enough even to teach others.
>> If I practice one thing steadily, I bet I can get the skill to a considerable level which is even good enough to teach others.
For the better or for the worse, time goes by fast.

>> Correct

I will reap what I sow.

>> Correct

I want to have plentiful harvests when I reap in areas of my life consisting of work and personal life broadly.

>> Correct 

As I do my best to achieve as much as possible in my work, so I want to have personal achievements.

>> As I do my best to achieve as much as possible in my work, so I can have personal achievements.

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