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HOMEWORK:
What food do you love to make? Answer in a few sentences.

Not now, I used to make sweets like cookies, brownies, and bread and I presented them to my friends. I was happy for giving something I like as well they loved that.

There are some errors in my feed back so, I try to correct these sentence. I'd be glad if you could check.

1. Yeah, raining and wind blow much.
>> Yeah, It's so raining and windy.

7. In Korea, we say that 'Kapoor'.
>> In Korea, It's called 'Kapoor'.

Thank you Donna. Take care.

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Hi there, Hae Ju, good evening!

I apologize again for the two items left undone in your grammar evaluation today. I am so happy however for you to check them and give alternative sentences. They are both correct, excellent job! Please do not hesitate to correct them again and again and tell me when something is not right about a sentences. This is one of the skills I want you to develop as well- to correct your own mistakes. You have done a very good job!

Anyway, regarding your homework, baking sweet treats is just so thoughtful. It costs a lot but them when you love your family and friends, it's all worth it. 

Thank you so much for this homework answer and take care too! See you soon again.

-T. Donna =)


Not now, I used to make sweets like cookies, brownies, and bread and I presented them to my friends. 
>> Correct!

I was happy for giving something I like as well they loved that.
>>  I was happy about giving something I like as well as they loved it.

There are some errors in my feed back so, I try to correct these sentence. I'd be glad if you could check.
>> Correct!

1. Yeah, raining and wind blow much.
>> Yeah, It's so raining and windy.
>> Correct!
Or: Yeah, it's so raining and windy.
Or: Yeah, raining and the wind is blowing much.

7. In Korea, we say that 'Kapoor'.
>> In Korea, It's called 'Kapoor'.
>> Correct!
Or:  In Korea, it's called 'Kapoor'.
Or: In Korea, way we say that as 'Kapoor'.

Thank you Donna. Take care.
>> Correct!

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