¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽŠ³»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

Homework

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ±è*¿ì
2022-06-29 627

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

Good morning again Donna!
I stayed up too late last night, so I don't have enough sleep.
I am so tired, but I am in the mood of delight and joy because I joined your English class in the morning.
My wife and I talked about Power English last night.
I told her the advantage of the class.
Thus she decided to join the class today.
I am so glad to hear that she enjoyed the first of the class with teacher Beth just before.
I wonder if you know her.
My wife actually tried to choose your class, but she couldn't do that because your class is already full.
Now, this is my homework.
I think the most Koreans are relatively healthy.
In my country many people know that balanced nutrition, regular exercise, keeping their body slim are important.
The richer, the healthier I think.
The most Korean have a good quality of life, and it's easy to obtain fresh vegetables, seasonal fruits, vitamins and somethings like that in Korea.
So I think Korea is a good country to live.
How about your country?

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Good afternoon, Dr. Kim!

I hope you are alert and awake as of this writing upon sleeping late last night with some discussions with your wife. It's great to hear about her first day and it is also very reassuring to know that you are satisfied with our teaching strategies and techniques. It's our pleasure to serve you! Regarding my class schedule, I hope to meet your wife in one way or another someday. My classes could get pretty busy sometimes. Teacher Beth and all of us always do our best to engage you in enjoyable and meaningful conversations.

Anyway, for the homework part, I realized that living in your country has a lot of advantages. There is more than enough opportunity for food, fitness, not to mention beauty in terms of  advanced medicine expecifically in your field of dermatology. In my country, the priviledged or the rich can access all of these conveniently. Meanwhile, a great number of Filipinos are still living in poverty and expereince malnutrition, diseases, and lack opportunities to better their lives. We have a long way to go to reach your level of independence in terms of financial security and nutrition.

Today, your writing was crystal clear with very limited room for suggestions to make. Carry on with your outstanding skills in writing!

See you again soon. Enjoy the rest of the day!

-T. Donna =)

Good morning again Donna!
>> Correct!

I stayed up too late last night, so I don't have enough sleep.
>> Correct!

I am so tired, but I am in the mood of delight and joy because I joined your English class in the morning.
>> Correct!

My wife and I talked about Power English last night.
>> Correct!

I told her the advantage of the class.
>> Correct!

Thus she decided to join the class today.
>> Correct!

I am so glad to hear that she enjoyed the first of the class with teacher Beth just before.
>> I am so glad to hear that she enjoyed her first class with teacher Beth.

I wonder if you know her.
>> Correct!

My wife actually tried to choose your class, but she couldn't do that because your class is already full.
>> Correct!

Now, this is my homework.
>> Correct!
 
I think the most Koreans are relatively healthy.
>> I think most Koreans are relatively healthy.

In my country many people know that balanced nutrition, regular exercise, keeping their body slim are important.
>> In my country many people know that balanced nutrition, regular exercise, and keeping their body slim are important.

The richer, the healthier I think.
>> Correct!

The most Korean have a good quality of life, and it's easy to obtain fresh vegetables, seasonal fruits, vitamins and somethings like that in Korea.
>> Most Koreans have a good quality of life, and it's easy to obtain fresh vegetables, seasonal fruits, vitamins and somethings like that in Korea.

So I think Korea is a good country to live.
>> Correct!

How about your country?
>> Correct!
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
118354 What is your favorite book and why? What lessons can you learn... ¿©*Áø ¿Ï·á 2022-04-20 0
118353 What is your favorite book and why? What lessons can you learn... ·ù*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2022-04-20 99
118352 Wednesday Homework ·ù*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2022-04-20 83
118351 Job ÃÖ*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2022-04-20 95
118350 Why do you think people worry about aging? Ȳ*ÇÏ ¿Ï·á 2022-04-20 120
118349 What song would you like to sing for your parents and why? ±Ý*Áø ¿Ï·á 2022-04-20 159
118348 raise kids ±Ç*Èñ ¿Ï·á 2022-04-20 181
118347 Homework ÇÔ*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2022-04-20 1
118346 First assignment À±*¿µ ¿Ï·á 2022-04-20 121
118345 my answer ÀÌ*¹Ì ¿Ï·á 2022-04-20 115
118344 Are online dating sites just a scam, or can they form lasting... ÁÖ*¼® ¿Ï·á 2022-04-20 1
118343 Self Introduction ¾ç*Àº ¿Ï·á 2022-04-20 132
118342 Homework Á¤*Çõ ¿Ï·á 2022-04-20 118
118341 Which part of your childhood do you wish you could change? ±è*Çö ¿Ï·á 2022-04-20 168
118340 What is your favorite book and why? What lessons can you learn... ½Å*¼· ¿Ï·á 2022-04-20 124
118339 The influence of books. ±è*À± ¿Ï·á 2022-04-19 91
118338 homework ±è*Å ¿Ï·á 2022-04-19 101
118337 What positive effect has stress on you? ±è*±Ô ¿Ï·á 2022-04-19 0
118336 writing task - Tony ±è*¼· ¿Ï·á 2022-04-19 1
118335 4/19 homework ヾ(≧¡ä≦*)o ÀÌ*À¯ ¿Ï·á 2022-04-19 81

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ Ķ¸°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öÆ° Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽŠ±ÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î ÇÏ°í ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04