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Before I write, I'm sorry that I don't answer the question you give me for homework. I kept thinking about the question But really I don't remember that experiences. So I answer the another homework sentence.

The last time. I bought the earring from the internet shopping mall. They delivered that product the next day. It was very fast. But, I disappointed when I opened the box. Because there wasn't anything in the box. Actually there was only a wrapping paper in the box. There was no earring. I guessed when they packed the product. It was slipped out of the paper. So just the only a wrapping paper was in the box.

Next day, I wrote that in to an inquiry board. And they give an answer. They would check the stock and they said they would answer again. But, a week has passed. They didn't give me the answer. So I was very angry. ultimately I called that shopping mall. And I requested that give solution right now. Funnily enough, when I got angry, they sent the earring right away.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello Eun Chae!
Thank you for doing your homework today.  Read and repeat the correct sentences so you will be able to remember them as you speak.  ^_^


~T. Maine


Before I write, I'm sorry that I don't answer the question you give me for homework. 
>>Before I write, I'm sorry for not answering the questions you gave me for my homework. 
I kept thinking about the question 
>>Correct. 
But really I don't remember that experiences. 
>>But I really don't remember any experience. 
So I answer the another homework sentence.
>>So I answer the other homework. 
The last time. 
>> I choose the last one. 
I bought the earring from the internet shopping mall. 
>> I bought a pair of earrings online.
They delivered that product the next day. 
>> They delivered that product the next day. 
It was very fast. 
>> It was very fast. 
But, I disappointed when I opened the box. 
>>But, I was disappointed when I opened the box. 
Because there wasn't anything in the box. 
>> It is because there wasn't anything inside. 
Actually there was only a wrapping paper in the box. 
>>Actually,  there was only a wrapper in the box. 
There was no earring. 
>>Correct. 
I guessed when they packed the product. 
>> I guess when they packed the product,
It was slipped out of the paper. 
>>it slipped out of paper. 
So just the only a wrapping paper was in the box.
>>So it was just the wrapper that was inside the box. 
Next day, I wrote that in to an inquiry board. 
>> The next day, I sent a complaint to the inquiry board.  
And they give an answer. 
>>And they gave a reply. 
They would check the stock and they said they would answer again. 
>>They would check the stock and said they would answer me back. 
But, a week has passed. 
>>But a week has passed. 
They didn't give me the answer. 
>>They didn't give me any answer. 
So I was very angry. ultimately I called that shopping mall. 
>> So I was very angry so I called the shopping mall. 
And I requested that give solution right now. 
>>I requested that they give me a solution right away. 
Funnily enough, when I got angry, they sent the earring right away.
>> Funnily when I got angry, they send the earring right away. 

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