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What is the most challenging thing about learning English?

작성자: 신*진
2022-06-28 893

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For me, pronunciation is the most challenging thing about learning English. Because since when I was an elementary school student I’ve always get some criticisms because of my English pronunciation. Even my parents and my teacher criticized my pronunciation so I think that might be a part of trauma for me. So since now whenever I have to talk with the foreigners in English, it makes me feel too nervous to express my opinion clearly. To overcome my trauma, I listened to diverse kind of songs and watched V-log whose makers use English to introduce its contents. But unfortunately I don’t think these kinds of things did really work. So I decided to start power English to improve my speaking skills. Furthermore, I want to know my wrong pronunciation and those kinds of bad habits. I hope my teacher can give me diverse advices and can let me know how to study and be skillful in speaking English. I wish that I can get a nice score in this Ielts exam for my college entrance.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Sue. I am sorry to hear about the traumatic experiences you had while learning English. However, I am glad you never gave up. I think listening to music is a good way to start apart from practicing speaking in our class. Also, watching English shows or movies and listening to podcasts while following the correct pronunciation of words, especially, American expressions can help as well. Good luck and let's talk again tomorrow. Have a good night. ~Teacher Jane c",) 


For me, pronunciation is the most challenging thing about learning English. 
>> CORRECT =) 

Because since when I was an elementary school student I’ve always get some criticisms because of my English pronunciation. 
>> Since I was an elementary school student I’ve always gotten some criticisms because of my English pronunciation. 

Even my parents and my teacher criticized my pronunciation so I think that might be a part of trauma for me. 
>> Even my parents and my teacher criticized my pronunciation so I think that might be a part of the trauma for me. 

So since now whenever I have to talk with the foreigners in English, it makes me feel too nervous to express my opinion clearly. 
>> So until now whenever I have to talk with foreigners in English, it makes me feel too nervous to express my opinions clearly. 

To overcome my trauma, I listened to diverse kind of songs and watched V-log whose makers use English to introduce its contents. 
>> To overcome my trauma, I listened to diverse kinds of songs and watched Vlogs whose makers use English to introduce their contents. 

But unfortunately I don’t think these kinds of things did really work. 
>> But unfortunately, I don’t think these kinds of things did really work. 

So I decided to start power English to improve my speaking skills. 
>> So I decided to start studying with Power English to improve my speaking skills. 

Furthermore, I want to know my wrong pronunciation and those kinds of bad habits. 
>> CORRECT =) 

I hope my teacher can give me diverse advices and can let me know how to study and be skillful in speaking English. 
>> I hope my teacher can give me different pieces of advice and can let me know how to study and be skillful in speaking English. 

I wish that I can get a nice score in this Ielts exam for my college entrance. 
>> I wish that I can get a nice score in this IELTS exam for my college entrance. 
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