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The reason why there are generally few women in top positions.

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The reason why there are generally few women in top positions is because from time immemorial people have held the idea that men are superior to women. It is difficult to erase that old history at once. We are slowly approaching gender equality.

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Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)

~ Teacher Tricia


The reason why there are generally few women in top positions is because from time immemorial people have held the idea that men are superior to women. 
>>> The reason why there are generally few women in top positions is that from time immemorial people have held the idea that men are superior to women. 

It is difficult to erase that old history at once. 
>>> CORRECT!

We are slowly approaching gender equality.
>>> CORRECT!
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