¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽŠ³»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

Homework and question

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ±è*¿ì
2022-06-24 477

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

First of all, thanks for teaching me today nonetheless I didn't tell you exactly if I could join the class.
Now I answer your request for today's homework.
There are many skin problems I've seen such as infection, dermatitis, trauma.
There are three groups of infections. (Bacteria, virus, fungus, etc...)(Could you tell me etc means and How I can read it?)
I get to the point of homework again. ^^
And there are many dermatitis such as contact dermatitis, urticaria, eczema, atopy, and so on.
And trauma include burn, abrasion, laceration, contusion....
Among them, the most common skin disease is a dermatitis of hand I think.
Hand dermatitis (so called hand eczema) usually result from contact of allergy or irritants.
It can be aggregated from some bad habits and life style.
So, I always say to that patients. " No alcohol, No exercise, Having Enough sleep, Avoidance of excessive contact to water and sweat."
Hand dermatitis is too hard to cure perfectly.
Nontheless we should try to treat.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hi, Dr. KIm! I hope that you had a blast this weekend.

Apologies for the late feedback to your homework. Anyway, thanks as well for squeezing in speaking English during your short vacation. You were very diligent on your first week of class and that is highly commendable. 

Before I comment on your homework answer, I would like to tell you the meaning of 'etc.' which is the abbreviation for the 'etcetera' that is used at the end of a list to  show similar items or kids of are included. Some other expressions you used below like 'so on' or 'among others' also mean similar to 'etc. or etcetera'.

Then, I Googled hand dermatitis and I have seen some rare cases of my classmates from my elementary days. Even so, I still played with them. ^^ Well, thank you for the extensive explanation and very clear flow of ideas presented on your homework answer. Your discussion could actually pass for a short Power Point Presentation. Wonderful job!

I shall see you in class soon. Good evening.

-T. Donna =)

First of all, thanks for teaching me today nonetheless I didn't tell you exactly if I could join the class.
>> Correct!
Or: First of all, thanks for teaching me today even though I didn't tell you exactly if I could join the class.

Now I answer your request for today's homework.
>> Now I  will answer your request for today's homework.

There are many skin problems I've seen such as infection, dermatitis, trauma.
>> There are many skin problems I've seen such as infection, dermatitis, and trauma.

There are three groups of infections. (Bacteria, virus, fungus, etc...)
>> Correct!
Or: There are three groups of infections and they are bacteria, virus, fungus, etc.

(Could you tell me etc means and How I can read it?)
>> (Could you tell me what etc. means and how I can read it?)

I get to the point of homework again. ^^
>> Correct!
Or: I will get to the point of the homework again.

And there are many dermatitis such as contact dermatitis, urticaria, eczema, atopy, and so on.
>> Correct!

And trauma include burn, abrasion, laceration, contusion....
>> Correct!
Or: Here, trauma include burn, abrasion, laceration, contusion....

Among them, the most common skin disease is a dermatitis of hand I think.
>> Correct!

Hand dermatitis (so called hand eczema) usually result from contact of allergy or irritants.
>> Hand dermatitis (so called hand eczema) usually results from contact of allergy or irritants.
Or: Hand dermatitis or the so called hand eczema usually results from contact with allergy or irritants.

It can be aggregated from some bad habits and life style.
>> Correct!

So, I always say to that patients. " No alcohol, No exercise, Having Enough sleep, Avoidance of excessive contact to water and sweat."
>> So, I always say to the patients, "No alcohol, no exercise, having enough sleep,  and avoidance excessive contact to water and sweat."

Hand dermatitis is too hard to cure perfectly.
>> Correct!

Nontheless we should try to treat.
>> Nonetheless we should try to treat it.

¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
122917 homework ¹Ú*Àº ¿Ï·á 2022-10-11 0
122916 Do you think that it is a good idea to stereotype people? ·ù*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2022-10-11 2562
122915 Tuesday Homework ·ù*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2022-10-11 1715
122914 Homework ÇÔ*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2022-10-11 1
122913 What is the most important memory in your life? Why is this the... ¼±* ¿Ï·á 2022-10-11 1
122912 Do you think bullying should be made a crime or is it part of... Ȳ*ÇÏ ¿Ï·á 2022-10-11 2101
122911 Do you agree that expanded programs should be granted by the... Ȳ*ÇÏ ¿Ï·á 2022-10-11 1738
122910 Homework ³ë*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2022-10-11 1
122909 apple À±*¿ø ¿Ï·á 2022-10-11 1097
122908 10/11 HOMEWORK ÀÌ*À¯ ¿Ï·á 2022-10-11 1766
122907 How much sports do you do at school? ÀÓ*È£ ¿Ï·á 2022-10-11 0
122906 english speech contest script ÀÌ*¹Ì ¿Ï·á 2022-10-11 2
122905 Is giving free fruits and vegetables common in Korea? ±è*±Ô ¿Ï·á 2022-10-10 0
122904 Social media ±è*Èñ ¿Ï·á 2022-10-10 2
122903 travel ±è*¼­ ¿Ï·á 2022-10-10 2378
122902 10.10.2022 ±è*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2022-10-10 1
122901 Are you scared of going/ seeing your doctor? Why or why not? ±è*À² ¿Ï·á 2022-10-10 3430
122900 Homework ±è*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2022-10-10 2669
122899 Homework ¼Û*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2022-10-10 2249
122898 Free essay À±*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2022-10-10 3

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ Ķ¸°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öÆ° Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽŠ±ÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î ÇÏ°í ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04