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Did you like your interview? Answer in a few sentences.

I had a little mistake but executed smoothly. I can't prepared for the Interview except your helps. Anyway, They want qualify me! But unfortunately, It doesn't fit the working conditions I hoped. I will be patient and seek another jobs for the present. But this experience was really valuable. I'm sure that this will help in the future.

Thanks for a thoughtful mind and a contribution.

Have a good weekend!

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Good evening, Hae Ju!

Congratulations for qualifying! Even if the working conditions were not perfect for you to work for that school, I am so happy that you took the challenge to perform and execute the interview and lesson excellently. I am sure that there will be a work out there that is made just for you. So, continue learning and speaking English for your future use. 

I'm so happy to help you in my little ways. Best of luck on your next lesson demonstration!

Enjoy your weekend! See you.

-T. Donna =)

I had a little mistake but executed smoothly. 
>> Correct!

I can't prepared for the Interview except your helps. 
>> I can't prepared for the interview except for your help. 

Anyway, They want qualify me! 
>> Anyway, they want to qualify me.

But unfortunately, It doesn't fit the working conditions I hoped. 
>> Unfortunately, it doesn't fit the working conditions I hoped for. 

I will be patient and seek another jobs for the present. 
>> I will be patient and seek another job for the present. 

But this experience was really valuable. 
>> Correct!
Or: This experience was really valuable. 

I'm sure that this will help in the future.
>> Correct!

Thanks for a thoughtful mind and a contribution.
>> Thanks for a thoughtful mind and the contribution.

Have a good weekend!
>> Correct!
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