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I would like to learn make up with cosmetics.
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The make up makes someone looks like different or more beautiful. it is so amazing.
It makes me want to attempt make up.
And to manage my health, i would like to play diverse exercise.
especially i want to learn tennis.
i have heard that tennis needs to strength, speed and skills.
So, i am going to learn tennis When i have much time than now.

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Hi, Jiny!
Thank you for doing your homework. I really think what you've thought of would be really exciting.
-T. Caitlyn
I would like to learn make up with cosmetics.
>> I would like to learn about cosmetics.
It is likely to be exciting to express my face in different ways.
>> It would be exciting to alter my appearance in different ways.
There are many contents about make up in YOUTUBE.
>> There are different content about makeup on YouTube.
The make up makes someone looks like different or more beautiful. it is so amazing.
>> It is amazing that makeups make someone look different or more beautiful.
It makes me want to attempt make up.
>> It makes me want to learn how to apply makeup.
And to manage my health, i would like to play diverse exercise.
>> To manage my health, I would like to try exercising.
especially i want to learn tennis.
>> I especially want to learn how to play tennis.
i have heard that tennis needs to strength, speed and skills. So, i am going to learn tennis When i have much time than now.
>> I heard playing tennis requires strength, speed, and skills so I plan to learn it when I have more free time.
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