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How does the weather affect your mood?

작성자: 김*연
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I feel a day's mood when I see and feel the weather in the back porch at the morning. The view is wide and open to the town. If I see the bright sunlight or feel the fresh air, I am so happy and I tend to wisper to myself "What a happy day!". However, if I see the heavy cloulds or see the fine dust, I have a sigh of worry or uncomfortable feeling.
Especially I would like to tell you about rain. I don't hate rainy day, but I don't like the humidity. Today also it was heavy rain. Like this day I just want to stay at home or cafe listening music and having a cup of coffee. It is wonderful just thinking!!!

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Arissa, 

Thank you for giving me your thoughts about the question I gave.
I agree that certain weather really could affect our mood. A bright day also makes me feel happy however if it's a very hot one, it makes me lazy. A rainy day makes me sad but when it's just a light rain, for some reason, it makes me feel calm and relaxed. Like you mentioned, it's great to stay at home and listen to music while having a cup of coffee, tea or chocolate drink. ^^ 

~ Teacher Gina

I feel a day's mood when I see and feel the weather in the back porch at the morning. The view is wide and open to the town. If I see the bright sunlight or feel the fresh air, I am so happy and I tend to wisper to myself "What a happy day!". However, if I see the heavy cloulds or see the fine dust, I have a sigh of worry or uncomfortable feeling.
Especially I would like to tell you about rain. I don't hate rainy day, but I don't like the humidity. Today also it was heavy rain. Like this day I just want to stay at home or cafe listening music and having a cup of coffee. It is wonderful just thinking!!!

>> I feel a day's mood when I see and feel the weather on the back porch in the morning. The view is wide and open to the town. If I see the bright sunlight or feel the fresh air, I am so happy and tend to whisper to myself, "What a happy day!". However, I sigh with worry or uncomfortable feeling if I see the heavy clouds or the fine dust. Especially, I would like to tell you about rain. I don't hate the rainy day, but I don't like the humidity. It was also raining heavily today. Just like this day, I want to stay at home or cafe listening to music and having a cup of coffee. It is wonderful to think about it!!!
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